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Rules of Usage for 100 English Words and Phrases

JJ Murray

Does it matter whether I use altogether or all together? Should I ever use etc. in formal writing? Does the difference between healthful and healthy really matter? Are the phrases due to and because of interchangeable? Is there a place for slang in any kind of writing? Does anyone really care about the word choices I make when I write?

Most readers do.

Despite the time-honored rules of English usage, writing has become more and more informal over the years. Slang is often the backbone of some novels. “Street literature” is flourishing. Using colloquialisms (popular expressions) is the trendy thing to do. Some readers eat up this kind of writing and ask for seconds: “Hey, he writes the way I speak, and I love it!” Advertisers who hype “less calories,” “luxuriant apartments,” and “healthy foods” often dispense with the rules of English usage entirely.

There is a difference between formal and informal writing. If you are using a first-person narrator in your story, you may let him or her narrate informally but not to the detriment of a wider audience who expects a certain amount of formality. If you are writing poetry, you can be as informal as the form of poetry allows or must be as formal as the form of poetry demands. If you are writing a journalistic, serious, or “literary” work, you must write formally at all times. If you are writing in third person, make sure your usage is correct in the prose or descriptive parts of the story. It is acceptable to have your characters speak informally, but every word around their dialogue must be formal.

Key to symbols

☺ = formally correct

OK = correct but not formal

X = informal, unacceptable, and incorrect

If you correctly use the following worrying, vexing, and bothersome English words and phrases, readers may not notice your efforts at all—and that is what you want to happen. Follow the rules, and readers will focus on the meat of your writing—not the fat. The key at right describes the symbols you will see in this alphabetized list.

100 Rules of usage

1) accept or except

Accept means to answer affirmatively or receive.Except means but, unless, other than, or exclude.

☺ I want you to accept these formal rules of English usage with open minds.

☺ Every writer except those who obviously do not care about their readers will follow these rules.

2) affect or effect

Affect means to influence, touch, or move. Effect (the verb) means to bring about.

☺ The fiscal cliff did not affect him at first.

☺ The new tax laws arising out of the fiscal cliff effected major, painful changes in his monthly budget.

3) aggravate or irritate

Aggravate means to worsen, magnify, or intensify. Irritate mainly means to anger or annoy.

X I wish she would stop aggravating me. <Is she really making you worse, intense, or magnified?

☺ I wish she would stop irritating me.

4) ain’t or am not

I am sorry to report this, but ain’t is now officially a valid and acceptable contraction of am not. However, do not use ain’t in formal writing except when writing dialogue: “This rule ain’t right,” the ancient grammarian said, “but I can live with it.”

5) all or all of

Both all and all of are correct. All is more formal.

OK All of the dopey dogs chased parked cars.

☺ All the dopey dogs chased parked cars.

6) all right or alright

Alright is neither formal nor correct. Do not use. Ever. You have been warned, all right?

7) allude or refer

To allude means to refer indirectly or suggest. Refer means to direct the attention or thoughts of.

X When you alluded to Congress, you referred to foolishness.

☺ When you referred to Congress, you alluded to foolishness.

8) almost or most

Almost is an adverb. Most is an adjective.

☺ Most writers want readers to appreciate their work.

☺ Almost all writers want to improve their writing by following standard rules of usage.

9) already or all ready

Already is an adverb. Ready is an adjective.

☺ I am on rule #9, and I am ready for more.

☺ I am already impressed by these rules of usage.

☺ We are all ready to learn more usage rules.

10) altogether or all together

Altogether is an adverb. Together is an adjective.

☺ There is altogether too much sloppiness in American journalism.

☺ Journalists were all together in agreeing that they should study these rules, too.

11) alumnus or alumna

Masculine singular is alumnus. Masculine plural is alumni. Feminine singular is alumna. Feminine plural is alumnae. Use alumni when you refer to both males and females.

☺ I am an alumnus of Marietta College.

☺ My wife is an alumna of Roanoke College.

☺ Jill and Scott are alumni of Biola University.

12) among or between

Use among when you are writing about more than two things or people. Use between when you are writing about only two things or people.

X Let us keep this informative article a secret between us four.

☺ Sometimes I feel that I am between a rock and a hard place when I teach usage.

☺ We must pray that intelligence plays a more important role among American politicians.

13) as to which, as to whether, or whether

Do not use as to at any time. Whether you want to or not does not matter. These words are unnecessary.

X The question as to which …

X The question as to whether …

☺ The question whether …

14) asset or trait

An asset is a useful or desirable thing, benefit, skill, ability, or quality. A trait is a distinguishing characteristic, mannerism, peculiarity, or quality. An asset is usually a source of strength, while a trait does not necessarily have to be.

OK A sense of humor was one of his best assets.

☺ A sense of humor was one of his best traits.

15) being as or being that

These phrases often take the place of since or because. Do not use, again ever.

X Being that it is Saturday, I will watch football all day long.

☺ Because (or since) it is Saturday, I will watch football all day long … unless my wife has other plans for me.

16) broke or bankrupt

Broke is and has always been slang for without money or bankrupt. Only use broke in dialogue.

X The government is in danger of going broke.

☺ The government is in danger of becoming bankrupt.

17) bunch, crowd, or group

Bunch is far too often applied to people when it is normally applied to flowers and bananas. Use crowd, troop, multitude, mob or group instead in formal usage.

X A bunch of clowns climbed out of the clown car.

☺ A mob of clowns climbed out of the clown car.

18) bust or burst

Bust is slang for a failure, bankrupt, and to demote. As a verb, bust is mistakenly used instead of burst.

X He busted out in laughter.

☺ He burst out in laughter.

X That business went bust.

☺ That business failed (or went bankrupt).

19) but, only, hardly, and scarcely

Never use these words with a negative because they are already negative.

X I haven’t but twenty dollars in my bank account because of these new taxes.

☺ I have but twenty dollars in my bank account because of these new taxes.

X I haven’t hardly any time to write.

☺ I hardly have time to write.

20) but or but that

Formal English only requires that. Delete but.

X I have no doubt but that Congress needs a reality check.

☺ I have no doubt that Congress needs a reality check.

21) can or may

Can means to be able. May means to have permission.

X Can I go to the movies? <I am sure you can. You have legs. Start walking.

☺ May I go to the movies?

22) can’t help but

This is another instance where but is not helpful.

X I can’t help but wonder about the foolishness of celebrities.

☺ I can’t help wondering about the foolishness of celebrities. 

23) climatic or climactic

Climatic refers to climate, the weather, or the environment. Climactic refers to climax or the highpoint.

X At the climatic moment, the detective solved the crime and arrested the murderer.

☺ At the climactic moment, the detective solved the crime and arrested the murderer.

24) company, guest, or visitor

Company can mean guests or visitors. A guest usually receives some form of hospitality. A visitor often spends a long time at someone’s dwelling.

OK We had company for dinner.

☺ We had guests for dinner.

OK We have company staying with us.

☺ We have visitors staying with us. 

25) complexioned or complected

Complexioned is a British word, and complected is an American word used by Mark Twain, O. Henry, and William Faulkner among others. Microsoft Word underlines complected in red; therefore, though complected exists in American literature, it does not exist at Microsoft, an American company. You be the judge.

26) continual or continuous

Continual means recurrently, repeated, or persistent. Continual events do not happen all the time. Continuous means uninterrupted, unceasing, or endless. Continuous events happen all the time.

X My children fight continuously. <Does this mean they never sleep, eat, or attend school?

☺ My children fight continually.

27) contractions

Do not use contractions in formal writing. Contractions are acceptable in dialogue.

28) could of, should of, would of

Never use any of these phrases, which are substitutes for could’ve, should’ve, or would’ve—contractions that you should not use in formal writing anyway (see rule #27). 

29) credible, creditable, or credulous

Credible means believable, sincere, or trustworthy. Creditable means worthy of respect or praise. Credulous means unsuspecting, gullible, or uncritical.

X There have been few credulous, creditable stories about extraterrestrial life.

☺ There have been few credible, creditable stories about extraterrestrial life.

☺ Entrepreneurs in the 1970s convinced a credulous public that they needed mood rings, lava lamps, and pet rocks.

30) “cropped” words

Avoid using the following shortened words (and other words like them) in formal writing: abs, admin, ammo, app, fab, info, intro, cell, lav, legit, mag, max, mike, prof, quads, rehab, veggie, or vocab. These are, of course, fine to use in dialogue. People do speak in shorthand.

31) data or datum

Data is plural. Datum is singular.

X The data proves that the government was wrong.

☺ The data prove that the government was wrong.

32) definitely

Definitely is definitely overused and abused. There are definitely other words, and sometimes you can most definitely delete definitely entirely.

X She is definitely the vilest celebrity I have ever met.

☺ She is the vilest celebrity I have ever met.

☺ She is undoubtedly the vilest celebrity I have ever met.

33) different from or different than

Different from is the standard in American English.

X Erykah Badu is different than any other singer I have ever heard.

☺ Eyrkah Badu is different from any other singer I have ever heard.

34) due to, on account of, or because of

Due to functions as an adjective. On account of is simply too wordy. In most cases, you can safely use because of.

X He lost his job due to (or on account of) downsizing.

☺ Yes: He lost his job because of downsizing.

☺ His sales were because of (or due to) his hard work and determination.

35) emigrate or immigrate

Emigrate means to leave a country. Immigrate means to enter a country.

X He emigrated from the United States to Canada.

☺ He emigrated from the United States to Canada.

36) etc.

Avoid using etc. in formal writing, and especially do not use and etc. Et cetera means and so forth. If you write and etc., you are actually writing and and so forth, which is redundant and a waste of ink.

37) expect or suppose

Expect means to regard as likely to happen. Suppose means to assume to be true for the sake of argument. Expect and suppose are not interchangeable. When in doubt, use believe, imagine, or think.

X I expect she is happy to be here.

☺ I suppose she is happy to be here.

☺ I think (imagine, believe) she is happy to be here.

38) farther or further

Use farther for distance you can or could actually measure. Use further for distance you cannot possibly measure.

☺ She drove farther west than I did.

☺ Nothing could be further from the truth in Washington, DC.

39) fewer or less, number or amount

Fewer and number apply to or could apply to an actual number. Less and amount apply to a quantity that has no specific number.

X This diet drink has less calories than regular soda does. <You could count these calories.

☺ This diet drink has fewer calories than regular soda does.

X I have a large amount of holiday bills. <You could count these bills.

☺ I have a large number of holiday bills.

40) former or latter

If possible, do not use these too extremely formal words at any time in your writing. They often confuse your readers. Use them (at your readers’ peril) only when discussing two things or people.

X She had soup, sandwich, and a soda. She only finished the latter.

OK She had soup and a sandwich. She only finished the former.

OK She had soup, sandwich, and a soda. She only finished the last.

☺ She had soup, sandwich, and a soda. She only finished the soda.

41) funny

Do not use funny when strange, unusual, odd, perplexing, bizarre, peculiar, or baffling work more effectively. Feel free to use funny in dialogue.

X She had a funny feeling. <Did this feeling make her laugh?

☺ She had a strange feeling.

X She felt funny this morning. <Is she a comedian?

☺ She felt peculiar this morning.

42) got

Got is often used with have when we really mean must. Got is also often used when have alone will do.

X I have got to buy that.

☺ I must buy that.

X I got no rhythm.

☺ I have no rhythm.

43) guess

Guess is overused. In formal writing, use think, suppose, presume, imagine, assume, trust, or believe instead.

X She guessed he was right. <Was she playing a guessing game at the time?

☺ She thought (supposed, believed) he was right.

44) hanged or hung

In the United States, hanged is only used in reference to an execution.

☺ He was hanged for capital murder.

☺ He hung his hat on the hook.

45) healthful or healthy

Healthful means productive of health, wholesome, nourishing, or nutritious. Healthy mean having health, fit, well, strong, or vigorous. Foods in general are not healthy—they help you become or stay healthy.

☺ That football player is certainly healthy.

☺ Oatmeal, apples, and bananas are healthful foods. 

46) human(s)

Some writers use human interchangeably with person. Use human only in reference to the race or the species, especially when writing science fiction, or when you are trying to be humorous.

X Many humans like to watch television.

☺ Many people like to watch television.

☺ Wilder’s The Skin of Our Teeth describes how the human race has survived throughout history of planet Earth.

47) if or whether

If introduces a phrase that contains doubt. Use whether when there are alternatives—“or” statements.

☺ He did not know whether to sink or swim.

☺ He wondered if he would ever be taller.

48) imply or infer

Imply means to indicate indirectly or suggest. Infer means to come to a conclusion by reasoning, conclude, or deduce.

☺ You imply in this article that you do not like the new tax laws.

☺ I infer from your article that you do not like the new tax laws.

49) in or into

In implies a state of rest or inaction. Use into when motion or direction are involved.

☺ Elvis is in the building.

☺ Elvis danced into the building.

☺ Heartbreak Hotel has fallen into disrepair.

50) in regards to or about

Use about instead of this wordy phrase. If you feel that you must use this phrase, please drop the s.

OK He had concerns in regard to her tenuous situation.

☺ He had concerns about her tenuous situation.

51) ingenious or ingenuous

Ingenious means clever or inventive. Ingenuous means open or frank.

☺ Thomas Edison was ingenious; I do not know if he was ingenuous or not.

☺ We need to have an ingenuous discussion about taxation; I am sure we can come up with some ingenious ideas.

52) inside of or inside

Of rears its unnecessary little head again.

X Police officers were eating inside of the doughnut shop.

☺ Police officers were eating inside the doughnut shop.

53) irregardless

Irregardless is not a word. Really. Check a dictionary if you do not believe me. Use regardless instead.

54) is where or is when

Try to avoid these awkward phrases at all times, especially if you are trying to define something.

X Faithfulness is when (or is where) you stay true to another person.

☺ Faithfulness is staying true to another person.

55) its or it’s

Its is possessive. It’s means it is or it has.

☺ The dog ate its bone in five minutes.

☺ It’s a beautiful day in the neighborhood.

☺ It’s been a long, lonely time.

56) kind of, rather, or somewhat

Rather and somewhat can easily replace kind of, which is an exceptionally vague phrase. Be definite. Either it is or is not. Either you are or you are not.

X I was kind of tired.

☺ I was somewhat tired.

☺ I was extremely tired.

☺ I was tired.

57) lay or lie

Lay, laid, and laid require an object—something to lay. Lie, lay, and lain do not require an object.

☺ Now I lay the rule in front of you; I laid the rule in front of you; I have laid the rule in front of you.

☺ I lie down to sleep; I lay down to sleep yesterday; I have lain down to sleep.

58) leave or let

Leave means to depart, abandon, or forsake. Let means to allow or give permission.

X Leave him be. <Abandon him be?

☺ Let him be.

X Leave him alone. <Forsake him alone?

☺ Let it alone.

59) like or as (if)

Unfortunately, we cannot remove like from the mouths of our youth (and some adults), but we can use these two phrases properly in our writing.

X Like, I was all, like, you know, happy like a puppy with a new squeaky toy.

☺ I was as happy as a puppy with a new squeaky toy.

X Like, you know, he cried like he was a river or something, and, like, his tears were like a waterfall.

☺ He cried as if he was a river, and his tears were as a waterfall.

60) loan or lend

Both are acceptable. Lend is more formal. Borrow is the antonym for lend.

OK Please loan me two thousand dollars.

☺ Please lend me two thousand dollars.

☺ The bank loaned me one thousand dollars, and I borrowed the rest from my brother.

61) lose or loose

Lose means to cease having. Loose means unfastened or to unfasten.

☺ Loose buttons are easy to lose.

62) lot, a lot, or lots (of)

Avoid using these unless you are writing dialogue. A lot and lots of are too vague for use in effective description.

X He has a lot of problems.

☺ He has voluminous problems.

X He loves her lots.

☺ He loves her more than the moon that glows and the dark that grows.

63) luxuriant or luxurious

Luxuriant means lush, fertile, and rich. Luxurious means pertaining to luxury.

☺ The rain forest was luxuriant.

☺ Cars I will never be able to afford are luxurious.

64) mad or angry

For many of us, mad still only means crazy or insane. Most modern thesauruses allow mad to mean angry. When writing, try to find other synonyms for angry such as annoyed, irritated, fuming, irate, livid, or outraged.

65) majority or most

Majority means more than half the number. Most means greatest in amount or degree.

X He was late to work the majority of the time.

☺ He was late to work most of the time.

☺ A majority of the people voted for the incumbent.

66) mean

Writers overuse mean to describe an unpleasant person. Try malicious, unkind, callous, cruel, nasty, or despicable instead.

67) moral or morale

As an adjective, moral means ethical and honest. As a noun, a moral is a lesson. Morale means spirit or attitude.

☺ The morale of the crew dissipated as the ship foundered on the high seas.

☺ “Gratitude is the sign of noble souls” is the moral of the fable.

68) nice

Nice is overused. There are nicer words you can use. A thesaurus will help you nicely.

OK He said a nice thing.

☺ He said an interesting, entertaining, effective, motivating, and thought-provoking thing.

69) off of or off

I hope this is our last issue with of; however,I have a strange feeling we will see of again.

X He jumped off of the diving board.

☺ He jumped off the diving board.

70) out loud or aloud

Out loud should only be used in informal writing or dialogue. Aloud is preferential in formal writing.

71) outside of or outside

Hello, of. We have missed you. Outside of often informally substitutes for except for or besides. Most writers omit of. Most good writers never use outside of at any time.

X Outside of koala bears, brown bats sleep longer than any other animal on earth.

☺ Besides (or except for) koala bears, brown bats sleep longer than any other animal on earth.

☺ There is a little country restaurant outside town that makes the best sweet potato pie.

72) per

Per is an overformal and pretentious word that should not be used in formal writing.

X The overpaid celebrity earns $15 million per year mainly for being infamous.

☺ The overpaid celebrity earns $15 million a year mainly for being infamous.

73) phenomena or phenomenon

Phenomena is plural. Phenomenon is singular.

☺ The Aurora Borealis is a mysterious phenomenon.

☺ Eerie sounds, acrid smells, and other creepy phenomena plagued the owners of the house.

74) plan on or plan to

Plan on is informal. Plan to is formal.

X He planned on visiting New York City.

☺ He planned to visit New York City.

75) prefer … to or prefer … more than

Prefer … to is formal and concise. Prefer … more than is wordy.

X He preferred apples more than he preferred oranges.

☺ He preferred apples to oranges.

76) pretty

I am pretty sure pretty used to mean attractive or beautiful exclusively. Now it pretty much takes the place of rather, somewhat, or very. This is not a pretty picture.

X They received a pretty good report from his teacher.

☺ They received a good (acceptable, decent) report from his teacher.

77) principal or principle

Principal means most important or most important official. A principle is a fundamental rule, truth, or belief.

☺ My principal objective in sharing these rules is to improve your writing.

☺ The principles you learn here will improve your writing.

78) proved or proven

Both are acceptable. Proved functions best as a verb, and proven functions best as an adjective.

☺ The prosecutor has proved his case well.

☺ That football player is a proven winner.

79) provided that or providing

Both are acceptable, but provided that is more formal.

OK She will sing, provided (or providing) she has a voice.

☺ She will sing, provided that she has a voice.

80) raise or rear

Raise is acceptable in American usage for to bring up children. Rear is more formal.

81) raise or rise

Raise requires an object (the thing raised) while rise does not.

☺ She raised the blinds and saw the sun rise.

82) rarely ever, hardly ever, or seldom ever

Ever is unnecessary in these phrases though hardly ever is somewhat acceptable.

OK She hardly ever went to the theater.

☺ She rarely went to the theater.

83) real, really, or very

These words are overused as modifiers. In many if not most occasions, they are entirely unnecessary.

X He drove a real (really, very) fast car.

OK He drove a fast car.

☺ He drove a Maserati, the fastest production car in the world.

84) reason … is because

This is a messy, illogical, and redundant phrase. Because means for this reason. Thus, you are actually writing “the reason is for this reason.”

X The reason some people refuse to recycle is because it takes longer to put out the trash.

☺ Some people refuse to recycle because it takes longer to put out the trash.

85) run, manage, operate, or own

Run, which has 30 definitions as a verb,can mean to operate a business. It is more formal to use manage, operate, or own when a business, store, or company is concerned.

OK She runs a daycare center.

☺ She operates (or manages, owns) a daycare center.

86) seem

Seem means to appear, look, or sound. It is illogical to write, “He could not seem to find his wallet.” He could not appear, look, or sound to find his wallet? Use seem in this manner only informally or in dialogue.

87) set or sit

Set requires an object (something to set) and involves action—except in reference to the sun. We allow the sun to set without an object. It is, after all, the sun. Sit does not have an object and involves inaction.

☺ He set the remote control on top of the television.

X The remote control is setting on top of the television. <What exactly is the remote setting?

☺ The remote control is sitting on top of the television.

88) shape or condition

Shape has been substituted for condition for many years, and this usage has become acceptable. To be more formal, use condition.

OK The used car is in bad shape.

☺ The used car is in bad condition.

89) so (as a conjunction)

So is overused as a conjunction as in “We ran out of money, so we left Las Vegas.” If you begin to overuse so, try changing the order of your sentence: “We left Las Vegas because we ran out of money.”

90) so (as an intensive modifier)

So is overused as an intensive modifier as in “Mary was so happy!” Using so in this manner also creates an incomplete sentence because a that clause is missing: “Mary was so happy that she …” Try using extremely, exceptionally, especially or exceedingly instead.

91) some or somewhat

Some has become a vague, informal replacement for somewhat or a small or moderate amount.

OK He only slept some last night. <How much sleep did he get exactly?

☺ He only slept for three hours last night.

OK His martial arts skills helped him some. <How much did his martial arts skills help him exactly?

☺ His martial arts skills helped him disarm the robber.

92) than or then

Than is the word to use when making comparisons. Then and than are not interchangeable.

X He liked summer better then winter.

☺ He liked summer better than winter.

93) there, their, or they’re

There is the adverb and expletive. There is a possessive adjective. They’re is the contraction they are and should not be used in formal writing.These words have never been interchangeable. Know their differences whenever you write.

94) to, too or two

Too means also. These words are not interchangeable.

☺ You, too, can learn to play two musical instruments.

95) toward or towards

Both words are acceptable. Toward is more commonly used in the United States. Towards is more commonly used in the United Kingdom.

96) try to or try to

Try to is preferred in formal writing.

X Try and understand these rules.

☺ Try to understand these rules.

97) unique

Unique means only one of its kind. There are no more degrees of uniqueness. “More unique” and “most unique” are illogical. Let unique be unique.

98) use to or used to

In American speech, most people drop the d. When writing, the d is necessary.

X He use to play the piano.

☺ He used to play the piano.

99) which, who, or whom

Do not use which to refer to a person. Use who or whom. Sometimes you can delete the pronoun entirely.

X The woman which he met at the party was on the telephone.

OK The woman whom he met at the party was on the telephone.

☺ The woman he met at the party was on the telephone.

100) whose or who’s

Whose is the possessive pronoun. Who’s can mean who is or who has. In formal writing, write out who is and who has.

X Who’s idea was this bothersome rule?

☺ Whose idea was this bothersome rule?

OK Who’s your best friend?

OK Who’s been your best friend?

If you employ the correct, formal usages of these words and phrases in your writing every time, your readers will take your writing seriously every time.

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Why Other Words for Said?

Of course, using "he said" and "she said" is the easiest way to explain who is talking or who you are quoting. However, when you use "said" over and over it makes your writing boring and repetitive. Using other words for said not only makes you sound more professional, but it can also help you add commentary by letting you put in negatives (yelled, derided, sarcastically implied), positives (complemented, effectively explains, carefully details), or details about the meaning of what was said (repetitively emphasizes, completely refutes, absolutely rebuts). In the examples, you might notice that I'm also using adverbs (ly words) for emphasis. I give a list of those below too!

How to Write Dialogue

Using other words for said is important when writing dialogue or conversation, whether it is an essay, a novel, a play, or a short story. Alternative verbs for said can help you:

• Convey emotion
• Present character more clearly
• Explain the relationship between the people speaking

Using the list below can help you actually think through the emotions that your character is feeling. I've grouped them according to types of emotions.

Dialogue Words

angry words	question words	said (neutral)	sad or upset	happy
argued	asked	commented	quavered	giggled
bellowed	questioned	added	stammered	greated
jeered	answered	pointed out	sniffled	smiled
accused	proposed	spoke	wailed	trilled
hissed	queried	observed	wept	marveled
threatened	responded	noted	whimpered	joked
scolded	retorted	went on	whined	laughed
yelled	objected	told	worried	congratulated
screamed	disagreed	mentioned	shrieked	bubbled
stormed	hypothesized	put in	sobbed	chatted

Friends reply, empathize, agree

Conflict Words for Said

mean	frightened	sympathized	guilty/sorry
demanded	impored	comforted	admitted
mimicked	trembled	consoled	apologized
ordered	quivered	empathized	pledged
dictated	pleaded	affirmed	promised
sneered	quaked	soothed	swore
mocked	begged	cheered	revealed
screamed	shuttered	purred	sighed
taunted	whispered	urged	confessed
threatened	wailed	related	confided
criticized	cried	offered	explained
swore	prayed	cajoled	lamented

Adverbs to Use with "Said" Words

neutral adverbs	negative adverbs	positive adverbs
absentmindedly	shyly	knowingly
nervously	fervently	proudly
shyly	nervously	fervently
Urgently	rudely	carefully
sheepishly	defiantly	sympathetically
mysteriously	wrongly	cheerfully
cautiously	judgementally	enthusiastically
decidedly	jealously	cleverly
frankly	overconfidently	generously
honestly	sharply	deliberately
powerfully	sternly	helpfully
utterly	suspiciously	truthfully
repeatedly	uselessly	wisely
partially	poorly	thoroughly

Adverbs describe or explain the type of action of verbs, adjectives or other adverbs. Additionally, you can use more than one adverb for emphasis: "Mrs. Ramsey calmly and patiently explained, "Remember adverbs usually, but not always, end in 'ly'."

Research and Author Tags

When citing research, you need to include the name of the author and the title of the article or book you are using.

Example: According to Robert Klass in "Wonderful Lives of Ants," the ant world is much more like a human society than most of us realize (Klass 45).

Long Paraphrases or Summaries. Many times, you might be paraphrasing or summarizing a source for more than just one sentence. To show the reader that you are continuing to give ideas from that source, you need to use author tags, which means you use the last name of the author and then a verb like "said."

example: Klass says that fire ants have a particularly interesting way of working together to survive a flood. The author describes the situation of an individual fire ant drowning when swept into the water. However, he notes, when the ants link together in a large mass, they can float for days without drowning.

Author Tags and Nouns: For the most professional sounding citations, you need to use alternative words for the name of the author as well as for said as the above example shows. See my chart for a list of good author last name substitutes.

Verb tense: Usually, you will use the present tense of the word for talking about a summary, quotation or paraphrase.

Author Tags List of "Said" Words

adding to	disagreeing with	positive	negative	neutral
agrees	disagrees	says	complains	says
concurs	refutes	affirms	conceeds	comments
supports	objects	acknowleges	confesses	hints
adds	retorts	pleads	insists	mentions
repeats	taunts	suggests	objects	notes
explains	replies	orders	cautions	offers
maintains	questions	teases	claims	observes

Many of the words used for dialogue can also be used for author tags. The important thing to remember is that you can let your reader know how you feel about this evidence, or how this evidence relates to other quotes you are using by the word you u

Alternatives for "Author"

the author	he/she/they	the article
the writer	the reporter	the research
the researcher	the essayist	the book
the scientist	the journalist	the evidence
the doctor	the narrator	the source
the columnist	the contributer	the piece

How this Makes Writing More Effective

Choosing the right "Said" word can help you put your evaluation of the source into your paper more easily, and show how this source helps present your own ideas. For example, if the source supports you, you can say:

• John Rayburn concurs with...
• Silvia Rath agrees....
• Joshua Reynolds supports the idea that

If the author presents an opposing view, you can make this clear by using:

• John Rayburn disagrees...
• On the other hand, Silvia Rath argues...
• Joshua Reynolds refutes the idea that...

If you want to show that a source is authoritative you can use a reference to their expertise after you have introduced them by name:

• Neil Armstrong disagreed with their findings. After examining the data, this scientist concluded...
• Bernie Sanders has charted his own way in devising public policy. In spite of what others say, this politician disagrees...
• Stephan Hawking decided to examine the theory. Knowing the subject thoroughly, this expert draws the conclusion...

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550 Alternative Words for "Said"

What Is a Dialogue Tag?

In writing, a dialogue tag is a group of words that follow a line of speech. They provide information about the words between the beginning and end quotation marks such as

• Who is speaking (i.e. he, she, they, Danny, Lucy)
• Volume (i.e. shouted, yelled, whispered)
• Tone (i.e. moaned, babbled, howled)

By using dialogue tags, writers are able to explain to readers the way in which their characters are speaking and the emotions that should be inferred from the inflection of their words.

Other Words for "Said" by Emotion

Repeating "he said, she said," can get annoying, but is it smart to use a different verb? There are abundant words to use instead, yet purists believe you're probably best not using them, since readers pay such little attention to "said" it effectively becomes invisible.

A good practice to follow is that when it’s understandable who is speaking the line of dialogue, you can remove the verb completely. It's surprising how much more professional your work will look if you do. In fact, let's make a rule: if it's obvious who's speaking, don't use anything.

You should only substitute "said" if the line of dialogue needs accentuation or verbalization to convey the way the words are expressed. Gorging your story with alternative words for "said" makes your work look amateurish, so be sure to se alternatives with moderation.

But sometimes you need to indicate who's speaking, and sometimes the word "said" doesn't quite do the job. That being said, if you’re struggling to find that elusive and perfect substitute, here’s a list of words (categorized by emotion) that might help.

Acceptance

Accepted, acknowledged, admitted, affirmed, agreed, assumed, conferred, confessed, confirmed, justified, settled, understood, undertook, verified.

Anger

Accused, barked, bellowed, bossed, carped, censured, condemned, criticized, demanded, fumed, gawped, glowered, growled, grumbled, hissed ordered, raged, remonstrated, reprimanded, retorted, scoffed, scolded, seethed, snapped, snarled, ticked off, told off, upbraided.

Contemplation

Contemplated, mused, pondered.

Conviction

Addressed, advertised, articulated, bragged, commanded, confided, decided, dictated, ended, exacted, finished, informed, made known, maintained, necessitated, pointed out, promised, reassured, remarked, repeated, reported, specified, stated, told.

Desire

Attracted, requested, wanted.

Excitement

Babbled, beamed, blurted, broadcasted, burst, cheered, chortled, chuckled, cried out, crooned, crowed, declared, emitted, exclaimed, giggled, hollered, howled, interjected, jabbered, laughed, praised, preached, presented, proclaimed, professed, promulgated, quaked, ranted, rejoiced, roared, screamed, shouted, shrieked, swore, thundered, trilled, trumpeted, vociferated, wailed, yawped, yelled, yelped, yowled.

Fear

Cautioned, shuddered, trembled, warned.

Generosity

Comforted, consoled, empathized, invited, offered, proffered, released, volunteered.

Persuasion

Advised, alleged, appealed, asserted, assured, avered, avowed, beckoned, begged, beseeched, cajoled, claimed, conceded, concluded, concurred, contended, defended, disposed, encouraged, entreated, held, hinted, implied, implored, importuned, inclined, indicated, insisted, pleaded, postulated, premised, presupposed, protested, stressed, suggested, touted, urged, vouched for, wheedled.

Pride

Chimed in, circulated, disseminated, distributed, expressed, grinned, made public, passed on, publicized, published, put forth, put out, quipped, quizzed, quoted, reckoned that, required, requisitioned, taunted, teased.

Provocation

Exposed, imitated, joked, leered, lied, mimicked, mocked, provoked.

Sadness

Agonized, bawled, blubbered, grieved, groaned, lamented, mewled, mourned, puled, sobbed, wept.

Storytelling

Announced, answered, began, called, commented, continued, denoted, disclosed, divulged, explained, imparted, noted, observed, proposed, rejoined, replied, revealed, shared, solicited, sought, testified, transferred, transmitted, went on.

Uncertainty

Asked, doubted, faltered, fretted, guessed, hesitated, hypothesized, inquired, lilted, quavered, queried, questioned, shrugged, speculated, stammered, stuttered, supposed, trailed off, wondered.

Words That Indicate Sound

Breathed, choked, croaked, drawled, echoed, grunted, keened, moaned, mumbled, murmured, panted, sang, sniffled, sniveled, snorted, spluttered, squeaked, uttered, voiced, whimpered, whined, whispered.

Other Words for "Asked"

When writing an inquisitive character, sometimes the standard "asked" can become a bit stale. Try using these alternatives when you want to add some variety to your dialogue.

Appealed	Begged	Beseeched
Contended	Entreated	Inclined
Insisted	Pleaded	Probed
Prodded	Protested	Cajoled
Stressed	Doubted	Faltered
Guessed	Hesitated	Hypothesized
Inquired	Lilted	Quavered
Queried	Questioned	Wondered

Other Words for "Stated"

Instead of repeatedly using stated to express the way in which a character delivers their words, try using one of these more descriptive alternatives.

Asserted	Concluded	Explained	Noted
Remarked	Reported	Specified	Told

Adverbs and Phrases to Explain How Something Was Said

Okay, so despite the warning, you’ve decided you really need to use one of the words above for "said." In order to make your writing absolutely zing, you might want to go whole hog and add an adverb or a phrase to convey or emphasize exactly how the line of dialogue was said.

An adverb is a word ending in -ly and modifies a verb.

The way it works is you choose whichever word for "said" you fancy from the list above, then add a adverb or phrase after it from the list below. For example, "She promised, with a controlled smile," or "He remarked, with a gloomy sigh." But do not overdo it. Be very careful not to end up sounding amateurish.

List of Adverbs for Dialogue

• Abruptly, Absently, Acidly, Angrily, Apologetically, Approvingly, Artfully
• Bemusedly
• Calmly, Caustically, Cheerfully, Complacently, Crossly
• Depressingly, Dryly
• Earnestly, Enthusiastically
• Gently, Gruffly
• Happily, Hotly
• Impatiently, Indulgently, Informed sassily, Innocently, Inquired doubtfully, Irritably
• Loftily, Loudly
• Mentally shrugged
• Naturally, Nodded agreeably, Not wanting to sound pushy, Noncommittally
• Offhandedly, Optimistically
• Pleasantly, Politely, Politely smooth, Promised in a motherly/fatherly way, Prompted gently Promptly,
• Quietly
• Reflectively, Roughly
• Sadly, Sympathetically, Sarcastically, Sincerely, Smiled faintly, Smugly, Soberly, Softly, Sparingly, Sternly,
• Tartly, Tautly, Teased softly, Tightly, Truthfully, Thoughtfully,
• Uncertainly, Unexpectedly, Urgently
• Vaguely
• Went on loyally, Wilfully misunderstood, Without sounding unduly curious, Wryly
• Xenophobically
• Yearningly
• Zealously

List of Phrases for Dialogue

"She said in a..."

Casual tone, chiding tone, courteous manner, curious tone, dry tone, flirtatious way, level tone, level way, perpetually tired voice, rasping tone, small panicky voice, soothing tone, voice soft with affection.

"She said with a..."

Controlled smile, fond look, gloomy sigh, note of relief, sad grimace, sad smile, sense of guilt, sigh of irritation, burgeoning excitement.

"She said with..."

Conviction, determination, fire, firm persistence, gentle remonstrance, graceful simplicity, mock astonishment, pleasure, quiet empathy, simple directness.

Other Phrases to Modify "Said"

• After a moment's reflection
• False cheerfulness
• Friendly fashion
• In quiet amazement
• Made the effort to sound reassuring
• Meaning the words more seriously than they sounded
• Sounded slightly brittle

Stephen King on Adverbs for Dialogue Attribution

Below is Stephen King's take on the use of adverbs. His advice is to use adverbs very conservatively in order to keep the integrity of your writing intact.

"Someone out there is now accusing me of being tiresome and anal-retentive. I deny it. I believe the road to hell is paved with adverbs, and I will shout it from the rooftops. To put it another way, they’re like dandelions. If you have one on your lawn, it looks pretty and unique. If you fail to root it out, however, you find five the next day . . . fifty the day after that . . . and then, my brothers and sisters, your lawn is totally, completely, and profligately covered with dandelions. By then you see them for the weeds they really are, but by then it’s — GASP!! — too late.

I can be a good sport about adverbs, though. Yes I can. With one exception: dialogue attribution. I insist that you use the adverb in dialogue attribution only in the rarest and most special of occasions ... and not even then, if you can avoid it. Just to make sure we all know what we’re talking about, examine these three sentences:

‘Put it down!’ she shouted.
‘Give it back,’ he pleaded, ‘it’s mine.’
‘Don’t be such a fool, Jekyll,’ Utterson said.

In these sentences, shouted, pleaded, and said are verbs of dialogue attribution. Now look at these dubious revisions:

‘Put it down! she shouted menacingly.
‘Give it back,’ he pleaded abjectly, ‘it’s mine.’
‘Don’t be such a fool, Jekyll,’ Utterson said contemptuously.

The three latter sentences are all weaker than the three former ones, and most readers will see why immediately."

— Stephen King, On Writing: A Memoir on the Craft

How to Show Emotion Through Actions Instead of Adverbs

Since the use of adverbs can often make a writer look amateurish, many choose to use actions instead of adverbs to express emotion. Take, for example, the scenario below, in which a man is feeling frustrated and angry upon learning that his girlfriend has been unfaithful. In the first example, adverbs are used. In the second, actions.

"Where were you all night?" he asked.

"I was with someone else," she mumbled nervously.

"Someone else?" he boomed violently. "Someone else?"

or

"Where were you all night?" he asked.

"I was with someone else," she replied with her eyes downcast. She was fiddling with her fingernails.

"Someone else?" he said, slamming the table with his fist. "Someone else?"

It's easy to see that in most exchanges of dialogue, less is more. Let your reader imagine the actions the characters are making and infer the emotions those actions suggest, rather than telling them the emotion outright.